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PF Cover - Spider-Goats

Published: Mar 9, 2011

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Here's the (sort of) companion to this: [link]

This one I wanted to be as grotesquely pulpish as I could make it. I think it contrasts quite nicely with the other one.

03/1511 -Uploaded final with book texture and all. Thanks again to everyone who helped with feedback!

Characters, title and Illustration (c) me

Image size

1215x1755px 2.21 MB

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ShibuyaCrow

Mar 9, 2011

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Awesome title font. I love how you switched it up to red. it's fantastic.
my only qualm is the pure red fonts. it needs a halo/backing thing to make it pop like the yellow font. also the lower corner text should be moved. There's too much dead space below it and it looks off center.

graphics wise though everything is awesome. I would still have prefered flinton's arm to be up abit. not parellel with the light beam, but just abit more up.
his fingers should be black n leaving shadow trails in the light?

it's super pulp fictiony <3